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[8] Lines On Paper                                  Bruce Canwell
                                        bruce.canwell@verizon.net

[Freelance writer Bruce Canwell is a New England native who has
worked for both DC and Marvel Comics. His essays have appeared in
TOMORROW SF, THE CORTLAND REVIEW, COMIC BOOK WEEK, the PORTSMOUTH
(NH) PRESS, and AMAZING HEROES. In the summer he is often found
at Fenway Park; in the winter, he enjoys playing high-stakes
poker against really dumb opponents.]

Installment 50: All Fall Down

When death strikes in a comics story, it is swift and dramatic.
Bucky Barnes, atomized as the drone plane explodes -- Captain
Stacy, buried beneath all that rubble -- Kara Zor-El, gasping her
final ragged breath cradled in Superman's arms.

In real life, death sometimes occurs that way. Sometimes. More
often, however, death is a process -- slow and inexorable,
extracting a toll not just from its victim, but from all in its
vicinity.

#

My father grew up in a rural New England town during the late-
1930s/early-40s. In his fourteenth year, he left his parents home
to work on a privately owned dairy farm, sandwiching his school
day between the morning and evening milkings.

That was also the year he smoked his first cigarette. Tobacco was
ubiquitous in the 1940s: it was cheap, it was heavily advertised,
and Surgeon General warnings were still decades in the future. My
father was not the first high school freshman of his era to light
up; certainly he was not the last. But on the day he inhaled that
first lungful of tar and nicotine, he signed his death warrant.

#

When I think of my father, the first word that comes to mind is
"size."

My father was a big guy: six-foot-three, 185 pounds during his
twenties and early thirties, up to 225 or 230 by the time he
reached his fifties. He grew up living off the land, served in
the Army after high school, became an electrician at a major New
England Naval shipyard once his tour of duty expired, then moved
within the company to become a supervisor of technical writing.
This was the life-path that created the avid hunter and
fisherman, the capable Mr.-Fix-It I grew up knowing. When you're
a little kid, it's an impressive thing to watch a Dad that big
effortlessly net a twenty-eight inch salmon, or change spark
plugs in the car, or bleed and dress the deer he shot during the
last weekend of hunting season. It's even more impressive when
you know you're unlikely to grow up able to do any of those
things yourself -- because things came so easily to my father, he
was not much of a teacher.

My father smoked steadily throughout, coughing more and more
violently as the years passed. When I was a teenager, I would see
him outside: often he would stop walking, double over, rumble
several violent coughs, then spit black phlegm before resuming
his pace. Many persons told him to see a doctor; he brushed aside
the notion.

He knew what he would hear, and he did not want to hear it.

#

To this day, I have no idea what my father made of me while I was
growing up. My brother inherited my father's love of things
mechanical. A decade separating them, my two sisters grew up
fishing on the wharf at our northern New England lakeside summer
cottage. It was easy to see where and how my father connected
with my siblings . . . but what, I have often wondered, did he
think about the son who preferred reading a book to baiting a
hook, who dreamed not of backwoods hamlets, but of cities teeming
with activity?

That was, is, and always will be a mystery.

#

Eventually my father had no choice: he visited a doctor. The
result was as bad as expected: emphysema from cigarettes plus
asbestos in his lungs, absorbed from his electrician days.
Erosion of his lung capacity was ongoing -- the question was, how
quickly did my father want to lose his ability to breathe? "Keep
smoking," the doctor told him, "and you'll be dead before you're
fifty." That day, at age thirty-eight and after nearly a quarter-
century of puffing tobacco, my father quit smoking.

#

My father was a stubborn man: I believe pure cussedness kept him
active long past the day when others would have folded their
tents.

Every April and every November, he would go to the lakeside place
by himself to dip smelts in the springtime and hunt deer in the
autumn. (During those trips, my mother stayed behind at the house
in which I grew up, because the younger of my sisters was still
in school.) In the summer months, my father cut wood for winter
burning: he was most content when felling trees with his chain-
saw or splitting wood with his axe. If there were changes as the
years advanced -- if he was able to do less wood-cutting, if his
smelting and hunting trips became increasingly short -- they were
subtle enough so his children did not dwell on them for long. We
were busy building our own lives, after all.

#

In January 1998, my mother and father sold their primary
residence and bought a new home in Florida, near the older of my
sisters. Returning to New England in mid-April, my parents went
back to the lakeside cottage where they would continue to spend
their summers. In May, on Mother's Day, my father went into the
hospital. He emerged reliant on oxygen.

August of that year marked my parents' 40th wedding anniversary.
My siblings and I marked the event by joining them at the
lakeside place. My "Huntress" story had been published in BATMAN
CHRONICLES # 14 only days before; my comps had yet to arrive,
forcing me to scramble at local comics shops in order to get
copies to give to my relatives.

The pleasure of having my second BATMAN-related story see print
was tempered by the reality of my father's condition, which had
deteriorated throughout the summer until he was restricted to his
favorite chair, the rocker in the corner of the living room that
gave two different views of the lake. A trip to the bathroom and
back was a trial for him, keeping focus when a conversation
involved three or more persons a challenge.

That Sunday morning, my siblings and their families decided to
visit one of the mountainous recreation spots in the area; I
stayed behind and played cribbage with my father. "You could'a
gone with them, y'know," he said at one point.

"I'm not much for the whole mountain/hiking thing," I said with a
shrug. I'm sure he looked at me and saw the kid who was immersed
in funnybooks and had no trouble believing that.

#

My parents struggled through that last summer, isolated at the
lake, 14 miles from the nearest town. My father was determined to
stay there until the week after Labor Day (he really WAS a
stubborn man.). That's when my mother drove him 150 miles south
to the town where I grew up, to keep a long-standing appointment
with his original respiratory doctor, the specialist who had
treated him for over two decades.

My mother later told me that, as she started the car and they
began to drive away, my father looked back at the summer cottage
he loved more than any other spot on Earth. "I think this is the
last time I'll see the old place," he said.

And of course, he was right.

#

Immediately after the appointment, the doctor admitted my father
into the hospital for special respiratory treatments and twice-
daily physical therapy. Often from his hospital bed my father
told me, "Y'do what y'gotta do." What he had to do, he reasoned,
was regain his strength so he and my mother could return to their
new Florida home in November. There was some concern among my
siblings and I that this plan was unrealistic. From her Florida
home, the older of my sisters spoke to the doctor and came away
encouraged. My mother expressed doubts only rarely.

I was struggling too hard at that time to question the situation
beyond its surface level. I was surviving on approximately three
hours of sleep each weeknight from September through mid-October,
thanks to my full-time job and my writing responsibilities. On
Friday nights I drove across state lines, traveling more than two
hours to visit my father in the hospital. I would see him again
on Saturdays and Sunday mornings, then return home late Sunday
afternoon and write until at least midnight. The cycle started
all over again with Monday's sunrise.

If my father said he was going to get well and winter in Florida,
a lifetime of experience had taught me not to bet against him.
And I needed to put a significant portion of my attention
elsewhere: storm clouds were brewing at Marvel.

#

Installment # 49 of this series chronicled the hurdles and slow-
downs artist Lee Weeks, editor Joe Andreani, and I experienced
while striving to put new NICK FURY material on the schedule at
Marvel. No sooner had the FURY projects come under control than
Marvel editor Tim Tuohy informed me there were internal rumblings
about the DEATHLOK series he and I were launching with artists
Sal Velluto and Bob Almond.

Marvel's editorial structure was especially chaotic at the end of
Bob Harras's tenure as Editor-In-Chief: there were editors in the
office whose names never appeared in the credits of the comics
(like the "Editorial Director" who vetoed my original FURY
miniseries proposal after Harras had approved it). Now, according
to Tuohy, one of those "hidden" editors had hatched his own idea
for a DEATHLOK series, one in which SHIELD Agent 18 -- a
supporting player in the then-ongoing CABLE series -- would be
installed as Deathlok's human component. This led other editors
in the Marvel offices to re-think the entire "Heavy Metal May"
start-up of four separate new series. Suddenly there was a
faction determined to make all the new series interconnect, to
tie them into a planned FORGE mini-series (thus tethering them to
X-MEN continuity), to change the name of the launch from "Heavy
Metal May" to "M-Tech."

As stated in Installments # 46-47, Tim Tuohy was always totally
open and honest in his dealings with me; he did not change his
approach during this time. I have notes from my discussions with
Tim about the editorial faction proposing a group concept called
"Mannites," which would not only immediately be granted a series
of their own, but would also be woven into the concepts of other
"M-Tech" books. Agent 18 would be fed into the Deathlok body
specifically to hunt the Mannites.

"It sounds like the M-Tech books are planned to launch before any
'Mannites' book," my notes from 10/06/98 say. "Maybe .... FORGE
[is] a weekly 4-issue mini-series focusing on the quest for ....
the Mannites. Meanwhile, the M-Tech books would .... kick off,
tangentally affected by what's going on in FORGE.

"What's the 'hook' behind each title? Taglines being kicked
around:

"X-51: The Soul of The Machine
"DEATHLOK: The Killing Machine
"BETA RAY BILL: The God in The Machine
"SPACEKNIGHTS (working title): The Brotherhood of The Machine"

This concept sounded as lame to me as it did to Tim. Tuohy's
frustrations were high: Marvel had already approved and scheduled
the DEATHLOK series my team had put forth -- they had made cash
outlays to Sal, Bob, and me for our development work and the 5-
page "series preview" we had created -- but new ownership put
Marvel in flux, every new project was suddenly at risk, and some
editors realized that where there is risk, there is also a chance
for reward. They moved to engineer a major "event" so they could
reap the rewards from its success . . . and if they had to hijack
a character another editor already had deep in development, they
were OK with that.

Tim fought to preserve our concept for DEATHLOK, and to keep our
series debut on track. I offered to make a trip to the Marvel
offices to help him campaign; he felt this was a matter the
editorial staff had to resolve on their own. He did give a
thumbs-up to another of my suggestions: I had a hundred copies of
our DEATHLOK 5-page preview copied, then distributed them to my
friends in the retail community. Each contained a letter giving
the Marvel address and asking readers to write and say they
wanted to see more Canwell/Velluto/Almond DEATHLOK. Tim reported
this campaign did indeed generate a handful of letters.

#

Even as the foundations for DEATHLOK shifted uncomfortably
beneath our feet, I was busy scripting the first batch of artwork
for the NICK FURY 12-pager Lee Weeks and I were producing for Joe
Andreani's SHADOWS & LIGHT anthology. My father never understood
my love of comics, in my youth, he would occasionally pick up one
and mock it as he thumbed through its pages; BATMAN: THE GAUNTLET
had passed without any sort of comment on his part. FURY, I felt,
might be different. No long-underwear costumes, no gimmicky
powers, no righteous moral credos -- just a guy who beats the
odds using his brains, muscle, stubbornness, and ingenuity. If a
comics character could be my father's kind of guy, Nick Fury was
that character. I desperately wanted to finish the story before
it was too late. FURY, I hoped, might cause my father to admit
that maybe I hadn't wasted all those childhood hours reading
comics.

#

I had just received stats of Lee's pencil roughs for the last
batch of FURY pages when I got the news my father was in a very
bad way. My older sister flew north from Florida. I packed the
FURY material and my comics-writing notebook before driving up to
the hospital, where my mother, my brother, and his family had
already gathered. It quickly became clear my younger sister
needed to be present as well, so I placed a call to
Massachusetts; she and her fiance joined us a few hours later.
"Don't cry for me," my father told his daughters when he saw
tears in their eyes. "I made my mistakes a long time ago."

#

That night the women and children went to stay at a hotel; my
mother, brother, and I remained with my father. Only once was he
not lucid -- he had been dozing, but woke up around 1:00 AM and
thought he was working on some fix-up project around the house.
He told us what we needed to do and tried to get out of bed, but
we held him down. "I can't get my breath," he said once, twice.
The third time he said it, he added, "This is all the breath I'm
going to get, isn't it?" And that realization brought him back to
reality, where he stayed for the rest of that night.

My brother and mother napped as the night unfolded; I stayed
awake at my father's bedside the entire night, even when he
himself was dozing. I had things I wanted to say to him and I
didn't know what they were and I was sure he wouldn't want to
hear them, even if I somehow found the words.

At 8:40 the next morning, I had my final conversation with my
father. "I'm going over to the hotel to pick up the girls," I
told him. He nodded. "We'll be back in about three-quarters of an
hour."

"Yeah," he gasped out, nodding again.

By the time we returned, he had slipped into a coma. At 10:35PM
on Friday October 23rd, 1998, my father died at age 62.

#

Saturday morning the process of notifying relatives and friends
began. My brother and I split those duties. I worked alone, using
the phone in the back bedroom of my brother's house. After a
half-dozen calls, I needed a break from delivering such bleak
news over and over again; I called my home to pick up any phone
messages recorded while I was away.

I found a Friday evening message from Bob Almond saying, "There
were editorial firings at Marvel today. No one knows for sure who
or how many. We're trying to get the details, and as soon as we
hear anything, I'll let you know."

I opened my comics-writing notebook to the page containing
contact information, then I paused. I understood how my father
must have felt years ago, when others told him to go see a
doctor: I knew what I would hear, and I did not want to hear it.
Still, what choice did I have?

I dialed Joe Andreani's office number at Marvel, got his standard
voice mail greeting, hung up without leaving a message. Next I
dialed and listened to my other editor's greeting. "Hi, this is
Tim Tuohy, and I USED to work at Marvel Comics . . ."

I leaned forward, resting my forehead against the wall as I hung
up the phone. In a phone conversation early the next week, Lee
Weeks confirmed what I knew at that moment: Andreani was gone,
Tuohy was gone.

More than my father had died on October 23rd, 1998.

Even with that realization hitting me like a physical blow, I had
to push it aside the situation at Marvel and deal with the
immediate tasks at hand. I had to make more calls to family and
friends, then I had writing work to be done.

I had to write my father's eulogy.

#

The funeral was Tuesday, October 27th, 1998. My mother decided on
a closed-casket ceremony, but the family arrived early in order
to see my father one last time before the funeral directors shut
the coffin. I arrived with a sheaf of papers in hand; I had one
last gift for my father. I placed the unfinished FURY story into
his coffin: copies of the 12 pages of Lee Weeks's art, of my plot
and the partial script I had written.

We are not a religious family: none of us is wagering on any sort
of afterlife. "If Dad DOES have some sort of journey ahead," I
told my siblings, trying to inject a bit of levity into my
actions, "he might want something to read along the way."

I never told them the other, more important aspect of that line
of reasoning. If there truly is an afterlife, the time may come
when I see my father once again. Should that happen, I'm hoping
he'll say to me, "Now, that NICK FURY thing -- that one, I
liked."
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[9] Suspended Animation                Michael Vance & Mark Allen
                                      MiklVance2@worldnet.att.net
                                      http://www.starland.com/sus

[Michael Vance, a professional writer since 1977 and has been
published in dozens of magazines including Starlog and Jack and
Jill, and as a syndicated columnist and cartoonist in over 500
newspapers. His history book, Forbidden Adventure: The History of
the American Comics Group, has been called a "benchmark in comics
history". He ghosted an internationally syndicated comic strip,
and his wrote own strip, Holiday Out, that was reprinted as a
comic book. Vance also wrote the comic books Straw Men, Angel of
Death, The Adventures of Captain Nemo, and Bloodtide. He is
listed in the Who's Who of American Comic Books and Comic Book
Superstars. His short stories have appeared in dozens of
magazines and recorded by actor William (Murder She Wrote)
Windom. Suspended Animation, has been published for more than
sixteen years, and Vance worked in newspapers for 22 years as an
editor, writer and advertising manager.

Mark Allen lives in Western Oklahoma with his wife and daughter.
He has been a Baptist minister for over 15 years, and has also
written for the Oklahoma news industry. Having indulged in comics
for nearly 30 years, Mark now enjoys using the written word to
share with others what he believes is a true, and extremely
under-acknowledged, art form.]

    Jokester Magazine #1/$2.99 & 48 pgs, Tool/Thwak/Jokester
Pub./ various writers and artists/ available at comics shops &
www.jokestermag.com

    Humor is in the eye and ear of the beholder (unless you are
deaf and blind; he, he)
    There are a few handicapped cartoonists in Jokester, a new
yuk sheet in the tradition of Mad and Cracked magazines. Let's
get them out of the way.
    I don't like jokes about bodily functions like flatulation.
Why?  They aren't funny. Now to the funny stuff, and there is
lots of it in Jokester which is a collection of single panel
cartoons, comic strips, one page and multi-page pieces, and
advertising parodies. My "best of..." list includes Randy
Glasbergen's single panel cartoons filled with cucumber-nosed men
and women who actually made me laugh inside. As example:
    A father says to his son: "At your age, Tommy, a boy's body
goes through changes that are not always easy to understand." His
son does not respond.  How could he with a hand growing out of
his mouth?
    Also on that list would be the art of Bruce Bolinger. His
manic style transforms even bland material into something fun.
His piece on "Jobbies"--jobs merged with hobbies--has a nasty
kick to it that is the hallmark of solid social satire. As
example:
    A dentist fishes in the mouth of his patient. The caption
reads: Why wait until the weekend and have to wake up at dawn to
enjoy your favorite hobby?  Just think of all the time you'll
save hooking wide-mouths in the comfort of your very own office!
    Jokester is recommended for those who can't get mad or
cracked enough to kick the ha-ha habit.
      MV

MINIVIEW: The Pin-Up Art of Dan DeCarlo [Fantagraphics} Imagine
the girls from Archie Comics mostly undressed. Before and while
DeCarlo drew Betty and Veronica, he drew nice but naughty girls
in single-panel cartoons for humor digests in the '50s and '60s.
Recommended with reservations.
    For information on Vance's short stories, comic books, and
available work, query MiklVance@Yahoo.com.
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[10] ComiX-Fan Reviews                            Eric J. Moreels
                                             x-fan@bigpond.net.au
                                     http://www.comixfan.com/xfan


[Editor's note: Some of the following reviews have spoilers to
plot details. This is a TEXT ONLY newsletter so those spoilers
are not hidden by HTML code as they are on the ComiX-fan site.]

NEW X-MEN #13

Reviewer: Michael Clarke, micha3lc@gmail.com
Story Title: "Into The Light"

Northstar fondly remembered.

Writers: Nunzio Defilippis and Christina Weir
Penciller: Michael Ryan
Inker: Rick Ketchum
Letterer: Dave Sharpe
Colorist: Pete Pantazis
Assistant Editor: Nick Lowe
Editor: Mike Marts
Editor In Chief: Joe Quesada
President: Dan Buckley
Publisher: Marvel Comics

New X-Men is a strange book, not because of its quality, which is
always high but because, in my opinion, it should be regarded as
one of the core X-Men titles, with the focus on the school, the
heart of modern X-Men stories, but instead this title has got
declining sales, and I cannot see why, especially looking at this
issue as an example.

This issue contains somewhat of a belated tribute to Northstar,
who was killed in Wolverine #25 a couple of months ago and it
seems to be a particularly fitting place for a tribute as
Northstar's main role of late was that of a teacher. This issue
also serves to introduce Northstar's eagerly awaited squad, Alpha
Squadron and I think that the scenes with these kids are
particularly successful, as I think that they convey what the
children must be going through having learned about the death of
their mentor. The seeming introduction of Victor as a gay student
in the institute is interesting, and fills a vacuum left in the
Marvel Universe left by the death of Northstar. I cannot help but
think, though, that this storyline would have been more
successful should Northstar still be alive.

I think that one of the problems with this issue is the step
backwards the New Mutants squad seems to have taken, with Josh
becoming the outsider once again, and I don't think that this is
a good idea as this issue had already been dealt with in the New
Mutants series but, for the moment, I want to give the writers
the benefit of the doubt and I am looking forward to seeing where
this is going.

One of the biggest strengths of this issue, I think is the
portrayal of Northstar as a hero, without focusing on his
personal life and using stereotypes and I think that this is one
of the reasons why the final scene with the unveiling of the
statue seems to work so well, as the words spoken by the cast,
particularly Dani's final piece, are moving and a poignant
reflection on Northstar's life.

While this series has had 5 artists so far and keeping one seems
to be a problem, I think that my favourite art is Michael Ryan's,
especially the art shown in this issue, as it is attractive and
dynamic, and yet has something about it that makes it suitable
for both action scenes and talking scenes, both of which Ryan
handles with ease. I particularly like his renditions of Elektra
and Captain America.

Overall, I think that this issue is without a doubt the strongest
of the series so far, and is a fantastic send-off for Northstar
although it does not look like we have quite seen the last of
him. If you want to read real quality, pick up this book.

ART: 4.5
STORY: 4.5
OVERALL: 4.5





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