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Subject: Hearts and Humor - I Stood In The Rain - October23, 2006



Hello, Gang.

I received so many wonderful comments during the week I

wrote about Georgia. Some of the comments were about the

series and some were for other stories.

    It's been a long weekend for Ginny and I. I just

barely got this story done. If it is OK with you,

I will post a series of your wonderful comments tomorrow

night.

    For those of you who acknowledge Halloween, here is

one of my memories and what I learned.

    Thanks to all my new members. I pray I can write

the words to keep you a member.

Mike

Keep on Waving


                 I Stood In The Rain

    My hand slipped, giving the black cat a lumpy nose. Fur rose
   
on it's back. It's fluffed tail stood straight in the air, as it

hissed at a ghost rising from the ground. I grabbed an orange

crayon and began to trace the outline of a Jack-O-Lantern, careful

to stay inside the lines and not make the same mistake I did with

the cat. I wanted my Jack-O-Lantern to be perfect.


    On my right, Rosemary was almost finished. She was fast and
   
really good. She was the best colorer in our four-room school.


    My crayon twirled in small circles, carefully filling the
   
pumpkin with orange. I reached the teeth - the hardest part.

Everything was fine, until the last tooth. My crayon caught in a

crease in the desk under the paper. The crayon followed it and

caused me to go outside the lines. To correct my mistake, I made

that tooth bigger than the rest, ruining my pumpkin's toothy grin.

Then again, maybe it made it scarier.


    The bell rang. "Be careful tonight, children. Have fun trick-
   
or-treating. I want you to write a story about your evening when

you come to school tomorrow."


    I rushed home and burst through the door, "Mum? Mum, when can
   
I go out?"


    "Michael, I've  told you a hundred times this week, you can't
   
go out until it's dark. Do your homework first. When you're done,

you can have your supper and then get dressed."


    The smell of fried bologna and boiled potatoes drifted to my
   
room. My stomach growled, as I completed my additions.


    "Michael, supper's ready." Mum called. I closed my scribbler
   
and rushed to the table, ready to eat and get my costume on.


    My thoughts were on the night ahead, as I spread butter on

the steaming potatoes and then smothered the bologna and potatoes

with Ketchup©. Normally, this was a meal I savored, but it was

Halloween. I woofed my dinner down. "Mum? Time to get ready?" I

stared at her anxiously.


    The sun slipped behind the tress across the street. "Ok, I
   
guess it's time."


    Mum helped me dress. Like most years, I was a hobo. We didn't
   
have fancy "Star Wars'" or "Ninja Turtle" costumes back then. We

had plastic masks of scary, old men handed down from my older

brothers. I slipped on a black pair of pants several sizes too

large for me, and threaded my arms through the sleeves of a

plaid checkered shirt.


    Mum helped me feed a piece of rope through the belt holes
   
and tied it tight around my waist. My winter boots completed

the outfit. We adjusted the mask on my face - eyes aligned

with the holes.


    "Be careful!" Mum called after me.


    I tilted my head, held the railing, and tried to see the
   
steps through the holes in my mask. My pillow sack was slung

over my shoulder.  In a few hours it would hang like an

anchor, slowing me down.


    I knocked on the door." Is Justin ready?" I asked.

    "He sure is!" his mom said. "He's been waiting for you."

    Justin Gilkie was my best friend back then. We planned
   
to walk through the whole village of Sambro. He was dressed

as a pirate and had a real sword from the nose of a swordfish.

The scars on his mask, with red paint for blood, look real

in the growing twilight.


    "How much do you think we'll get?" Justin asked.


    "If we walk all the way to 'The Basin,' We'll have more
   
than we can carry." The Basin was on the other side of Sambro.


   "I hope we get lots of candy and chips. I hate it when
   
we get too many apples." he said.


    "I heard Martha's mom is giving candy apples." I said.


    "OK! I like those, but regular apples seem cheap to me."


    We reached the end of the point, and began to walk from
   
house-to-house. Friends joined us. Sweat beaded on our faces

under the masks. Between stops, we'd lift the masks to cool

off. In a few hours, we walked dirt roads, climbed steep hills,

stumbled back down them, and knocked on doors until our

knuckles were sore.


    I stood behind my friends, as Justin knocked on my door.
   
My mum looked out and began handing out candy. "Michael! You

can't fool me!" My face turned red under my mask.


    "Let's try my mom." Justin said. She caught on too.


            ****************************


    "I'm tired." I said.


    "Me too." Justin replied, his mask resting on the top
   
on his head. The elastic band holding it, tangled in the

hair at the back of his head. "I got enough! Most houses

are out of stuff anyway. Let's go home.


    My legs hurt. Sweat rolled down my spine, and my feet
   
ached from the heavy boots. I wanted to go home and see

what I got. "OK! Let's go home. Tomorrow,  let's get up

early and look for firecrackers the big kids dropped. I

wonder whose outhouse gets turned over?"


    In my bedroom, I spilled the contents of my pillow
   
cloth onto my bed: chocolate, sweet candies, potato chips,

and so many wonderful things. I stuffed it back in my bag

and hid it from my brothers under my bed.


            ********************************


    I stood by a light pole and watched little kids run
   
from their parent's cars to the front door of our house.

They knocked, gathered the candy my mum handed out, and

rushed back to their parent's cars. Heavy rain beat down on me.


    I was thirteen - a year of change. I wanted to be little
   
and gather candy. I wanted to be older and join the big kids

in their mischief - lighting firecrackers, throwing rolls of

toilet paper over tree limbs, or even rolling over an outhouse.


    The rain beat down. I walked home. "You miss going out, don't
   
you?" Mum asked, as I walked in the door, dripping water on the

floor.


    "No, I'm OK."


    She looked at me and handed me a bag. "I saved some for you."


    I went to bed, cherishing the bag Mum handed me.


            *************************************


    It was the first big change of my life. I was too old to
   
trick-or-treat. Toys were left in a box under my bed. Cars,

dating, and freedom were in my future.


    I was at the in-between stage.


    Years later, I learned that night was the beginning of
   
many changes. I'd grow comfortable, think everything was right

in my life, and once again stand in the rain.


    I went to work and learned layoffs were coming. I wanted
   
to stay where I was, comfortable in my surroundings. The

future was unknown.


    I stood in the rain.


    A job offer came. It was in another province. I didn't
   
want to move from what I knew.


    I stood in the rain.


    I met new people, experienced new things, settled
   
down, and in a few years, another job came to an end.


    I stood in the rain.


    Dressing up and knocking on doors ended a long time
   
ago. Today,  I stand in the rain, knock on new doors, hold

out my pillow cloth, and wait to see what treat life will

fill it with.


    Michael T. Smith


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