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Subject: Starfish: The Old Farmhouse, Kathy Baker & Carol Brosowske - April02, 2005



Saturday, April 2, 2004  

Make a Ripple - Make a Difference

Greetings, Ripplemakers

Here's a special surprise for someone.  You'll know who you are.  This is one of those "2-writer" stories.  They tend to be longer, but are usually quite interesting (and fun). If you don't know how it works, here it is:  One person has a thought and writes the first part of a story.  Then second person does not know what the first person was thinking, and has to pick up the story and continue.  Then it's back to the first writer, who doesn't know where the second one is headed with the story.  And so on and so on.  By then end, the result is usually not even close to what either writer had in mind.  Lots of fun to participate in, just to see where it goes. 

This one was written by one of our old favorites and a brand new writer, Carol Brosowske.  I'm told that Carol has dreamed of writing for a long time, and this is her first effort.  I think you'll like it.  I did. 

From now on, 2-writer stories will be published as a special edition as they are submitted.  The subject line of the email will be "Starfish: Special Edition".  Remember that not all special editions will be 2-writer stores though.

I hope you enjoy this one.

Bob

The Old Farmhouse
by
Kathy Baker & Carol Brosowske

KATHY WRITES:

"That's it, that's it, that's it!  It's mine, it's mine, it's mine!" screamed Kathy as both sleeping dogs jumped sky high, ran from the kitchen to the bedroom, and disappeared under the bed. 

She'd always dreamed of an old, two-story farmhouse, one with porches that wrapped around three sides.  While glancing through the Dallas Morning News it had caught her attention.  Everything about it was perfect; it was out of the city, but not so far that she couldn't have coffee and lunches with girlfriends.  Suddenly she was in an all-out frenzy punching the phone buttons.

 "Hello," said Carol.  "Hey, Kathy, slow down I can't understand a word you're saying!  What's wrong?  Are you okay?"

"Oh, Carol, I'm better than okay!  I've found my dream house and we've got to go see it this afternoon.  Please don't tell me you have other plans or I'll never speak to you again," Kathy said jokingly.  She truly was joking in one sense of the word, but at the same time she was dead serious!  She was on a mission to see that old house, and wasn??™t going to take no for an answer. 

CAROL WRITES: 

"Of course I??™ll go," Carol told her.  "But I have something to tell you about that house."  Carol swears she heard Kathy drop the phone, and it seemed like an eternity before she responded.

"What????  Kathy asked.  You could almost hear the tear in her eye.

Carol told her that she had seen the same ad in the newspaper just one day earlier.  With some tender urging Carol talked her husband into going with her to look it.  She continued saying the house was wonderful, it had been totally redone and even had some wonderful antique furniture left that was to be sold with the house.  "Kathy,??? Carol said, ???this house is perfect, except for the price.???  It would make the most wonderful bed and breakfast, but alone it just was not affordable.

Kathy clung to every word, and the moment Carol finished telling her about this wonderful old dwelling, she said, ???Well, let??™s buy it together and be partners.  But first get dressed, let??™s go see it.??? 

Within 20 minutes Carol was dressed, out the door, and speeding to her friend??™s house.  It was a gorgeous day and a great time for a new adventure.  Carol could hardly wait to see Kathy's expression when she walked in for the first time.

KATHY WRITES:

Knowing Carol drove like a little old granny, Kathy insisted on driving.  Carol had never been so terrified in her life, nor taken so many turns on two wheels!  In what seemed like a split second, the 30-mile trip was behind them and they screeched to a stop at the Realtor??™s office.  ???Stay here, Carol.  I??™ll get the key and be right back, you don??™t need to get out.???

The way her knees were shaking, Carol would have fallen on her face anyway.  She was happy to stay put and do deep breathing exercises, as she rummaged through her purse looking for a Valium.     

With key in hand, Kathy peeled out of the parking area.  Soon they were driving down gravel roads with pastures on both sides, and herds of cattle grazing.  As soon as Kathy spotted the baby calves playing, she was transformed into a calm and sane person once again.  Carol had never been so relieved in her entire life, especially since she still hadn??™t found the Valium.

???Oh, Carol, I didn??™t know the lane leading up to the house was lined with trees forming a canopy,??? Kathy gushed.  ???This is even more than I expected.  Haunted, yeah, sure it??™s haunted!  Did those Realtors mention that to you yesterday????

Carol had just begun to calm down, and now she was hearing this lovely home might be haunted!  She started digging through her purse again looking for the elusive Valium.  What had she gotten herself into now? 

CAROL WRITES:

As they started up the steps to the porch, both gave a sigh and started to open the door.  Before either of them could reach the doorknob, the front door slowly opened all on its own.  Kathy gulped and grabbed onto Carol??™s arm for support.  Carol led the way and both entered the hallway.  The sunlight shown through the panes of glass above and gave a glorious shine to the dark walnut floors below.  They crept in further.  Carol started to laugh and said, ??? Kathy if your chin drops any further, you will scratch these beautiful hardwood floors."  Kathy laughed, and then agreed that Carol had been right, it truly was an extraordinary house.  It was the most gorgeous house she had ever seen, or imagined.  It would make a grand bed and breakfast. 

The two friends looked at each other and shook hands.  "Partners????  Carol asked.

"Partners!???  Kathy answered. 

They began to walk through the kitchen and just as they rounded the corner they saw it.  It wasn't a dream, it wasn't a figment of their imagination, and it was there right in front of them.  Carol swallowed hard and tried to speak, but no words would come out.  She was frozen in fear.  She wanted to look at Kathy, but her head simply would not turn, it was like she was glued to the floor and every appendage of her body was glued too.  Nothing moved, nothing except her eyes.  She could feel them blinking over and over, hoping that she really wasn't seeing what was in front of her, but blinking did not make it go away, in fact it seemed to be getting closer.

KATHY WRITES:

???Isn??™t that the cutest thing you??™ve ever seen????  Kathy squealed as she bent down to touch the beautiful black and white coat.  ???Oh you poor baby, where is your mama and the rest of your litter????  She was cuddling and stroking the tiny body when she noticed Carol was frozen in place, and turning pale.  ???Here Carol, feel the coat on this precious critter,??? she said as she extended her hands with the baby cradled tenderly.

???Is t-t-t-that wh-what I think it is????  Carol stammered, as she backed into the wall bumping her head.

Doing her best not to laugh loudly and scare the tiny creature, Kathy replied, ???Well, just what do you think it is, you city girl, you????  

???S-s-sk-sk-unk!???

???We??™ve got to find the rest of the litter or take it with us when we leave.  Otherwise, it will die,??? said Kathy, who by now had it wrapped up warm and snug in her jacket.  Carol continued backing away as Kathy approached wanting her to see it up close and personal.

Carol was still keeping her distance.  ???Are you out of your mind, or what?  That thing is going to spray us, and we??™ll be soaking in tomato juice for a week!??? 

???Babies this size won??™t spray!  But, I have no idea how long it??™s been here alone.???  She handed the baby to Carol and began looking through the cabinets for anything that would hold water.  If nothing else, it had to be kept hydrated.  By the time she found a paper cup and turned around, Carol was sitting on the floor, the baby was sound asleep against her neck, and she was singing a lullaby.

CAROL WRITES:

Kathy laughed out loud, but then anyone hearing Carol??™s singing would laugh; either that or run for cover.  There wasn't a worse voice this side of the Mississippi.  Carol was known throughout her hometown as having the worst voice ever.

With Kathy??™s laughing, she immediately stopped her lullaby.  "Yes, I know, I??™m a sucker for anything in a fur coat, even a stinky old skunk!"  Kathy continued laughing, then stopped suddenly when she saw Carol point to the old stone fireplace.  Yep, there was mama skunk coming to look for her baby.  "I suppose you are going to tell me that one won't spray us either,??? quipped Carol. 

 "No, actually that one will," said Kathy.  "My advice is to put that little one down now, and back out of this house slowly before we startle her."  Carol did as she was told.  They backed out slowly with the mama skunk watching their every move.

Once they were safely outside, Carol again started searching her purse for that darned elusive Valium.  This time she succeeded and popped it into her dry mouth, no time for water.  It stuck in her throat slightly, but then slid right down.  Kathy once again laughed.  Carol did not think it was amusing, but gave her friend a half smile anyway.

"Now what????  Carol asked. 

Kathy looked at her with tears in her eyes.  " We are going right down to that Realtors office, and make a deal on this house," she said in a very determined voice. 

Carol looked at her like she was nuts, "BBBBBut you haven't even seen the whole house yet, and what about the skunks, and what about it being haunted, and what about the price?  And what about??¦" 

???What about you just get in the car and let??™s go.???  Kathy interrupted.  ???The house is perfect, I trust your judgment, we??™ll make it work, I promise.  I know it will make a great bed and breakfast.  As far as the wildlife goes, hey you have to expect that in the country.  DUHHHHHH!  Besides, the last time I heard, haunted Bed and Breakfast places are the IN thing.???  Kathy winked.

Carol nodded to her friend, fastened her seat belt, and they were off to make the deal of a lifetime.

 KATHY WRITES:

While driving back to the Realtor??™s office, Kathy began wondering how she would break the news to her husband.  They had always discussed things before plunking down a large amount of money on anything.  Besides, after the run-in with the skunks she hadn??™t even inspected the entire house. 

???Carol, how about we sleep on this overnight, run the idea by our husbands, and come back tomorrow.  We??™ll go through the entire house, and then see if we feel the same way.???

With a disappointed glint in her eye Carol hesitantly agreed.  ???Well, I suppose you??™re right.  It is a lot of money unless we??™re both positive, but I know I??™m not changing my mind.???

They returned the key and told the Realtors they would return tomorrow.  As Kathy backed out, she noticed a gas station just across the street.  Knowing she was running on fumes, she pulled in to fill up.  While inside paying her bill, she spotted the Texas Lottery sign for that night??™s drawing:  $26,000,000!  She suddenly had an overwhelming urge to buy tickets, lots of tickets, and an unusual feeling of luck descended around her.  She??™d never felt anything quite like it.  Digging frantically through her purse, she scrounged up $62.00 and spent every last dollar.  She never played the lottery, she knew Carol didn??™t either, so decided not to mention her pocket full of tickets.  She would just surprise Carol the next morning with a phone call stating she was now a very wealthy woman.   

They were nearly back home when they both saw the wall of black clouds to the west.  ???Whoa!  Looks like we??™re in for some major storms this evening,??? Kathy complained.  Turning on the radio confirmed her suspicions, major thunderstorms with hail, and the probability of tornados.  ???That??™s the one thing I hate about Texas, no basements!  I??™ve lived in ???tornado alley??™ my entire life, but at least in Kansas we had basements.  Here, you just take your chances when it comes to old Mother Nature.???

CAROL WRITES:

Kathy pulled into her driveway just as the rain started.  Carol said " just let me out here, I??™ll climb into my car and head for home before the storm really hits."  Kathy pulled into the garage and the door was down before Carol even pulled away.  Carol was feeling very relaxed after that pill, plus a little let down after Kathy's radical mind change about the house.  She whirled things around in her mind as she drove along the parkway towards home.  "Weird!" she said out loud.  "How can someone change in mid stream just like that?"  She knew Kathy very well, after all they had been friends for nearly two decades, still this was very out of character for her.  The more she thought, the angrier she became.  Carol had wanted to think about it, when Kathy insisted on going forward with the deal, and then in a matter of seconds completely did an about face.  She tried to shrug it off as she turned onto her street.  She looked up at the sky, and it was positively black.  She was glad she was almost home.  As she pulled into her garage, she could hear her three dogs barking, it was their way of welcoming her back home.  She hoped she could let the dogs out into the backyard before the storm hit too hard.

She was still feeling a bit woozy from the Valium an hour earlier, and decided she should lay down for a while.  She had plenty of time before she had to start dinner.  She had made a roast in the crock-pot that morning before leaving, and the aroma was enveloping the house in the most amazing fragrance.  She would peel potatoes after she and the three dogs rested a bit.  Carol had fallen asleep almost the moment her head hit the pillow, but woke up minutes later to the sound of hail and tornado sirens.  All of a sudden the electricity went out, there was a loud clap of thunder, and then the sound of freight train, which could not have been possible; the closest railroad track was over 25 miles away.

KATHY WRITES:

Luckily the storm didn??™t last too long, but it had been a ferocious one. 

Electricity was restored within a few hours and Kathy was sitting with pen and pencil to make note of the winning lottery numbers.  The news and storm reports seemed to go on forever as she impatiently waited for the drawing.

Finally:  23 ??“ 4 ??“ 50 ??“ 16 ??“ 31 ??“ 48 PB  

With her pile of tickets before her, she began plowing through them one by one, checking and double-checking.  It was late, she was getting weary, and then there it was.  The winning ticket!  Again the dogs took refuge under the bed, as she raced through the house screaming, ???I won, I won, I won!???

It was late afternoon the following day when Kathy and Carol drove back to the old farmhouse.  They didn??™t bother picking up the key since they had discovered the door lock didn??™t work anyway.  As they started down the tree-lined lane to the house, they noticed broken limbs and debris everywhere.  It looked like a war zone.  They rounded the slight bend in the lane, and both gasped at the sight; the house was gone!  It had literally been picked up and torn to shreds by the tornado the night before.

They sat in the car with tears streaming down their faces.  Their dreamed had been yanked right out from under them.  Kathy finally decided they must look at the bright side.  They hadn??™t put down any earnest money, which more than likely would have been lost.  Plus, she had enough money now that they could buy anything that struck their fancy.

???Carol, lets get out and rummage around before we leave.  You never know what small items sometimes survive a tornado, and we can stretch our legs before driving home,??? suggested Kathy.  ???You never know, we might just find some valuable old trinket.???

As they walked they pushed debris around with their shoes, and looked under loose boards.  Suddenly Carol shouted, ???Kathy, I think there used to be a cemetery here!  Come see, but I think these are pieces of old tombstones.???

Sure enough - they were old, old headstones that had crumbled due to age and being made of limestone.  Neither woman could understand why a house would be built on top of them in the first place.  It seemed so very wrong.  As close as they could tell, it had probably been a family cemetery many years ago.

Time had passed quickly while they rummaged around, and it was getting darker by the minute.  They hopped in the car to drive away from their shattered dream.  Before rounding the bend in the lane, Kathy stopped.  They turned to look back one last time ??¦ and before their eyes were three apparitions, located exactly where the broken headstones had been found.  They seemed to be frolicking or dancing, as if they were children at play.  No doubt, eerie things had occurred in that old farmhouse, and the stories of haunting had not been fabricated.  Sacred, final resting places are not to be built upon or desecrated, and what these friends witnessed now, were free and happy spirits - Mother Nature had seen to it at long last??¦??¦??¦

?©2005
Kathleene S. Baker
Carol A. Brosowske 

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From the Mailbag

Re: Liz and Her Dolls

This one is beautiful as it was the kind of child I was and i wanted my daughter to be the same, which she never was. Funny how we're given the exact opposite of what we want. Guess God is always teaching us lessons.

Julie

Re:  Precious Memories of Grandma
 

Dear Barbara,
I hope you receive this message as it is important to me as to you on relating to your most beautiful story of your grandmother!  I love to hear the stories of those type as they just warm the cockles of my heart plus in this particular instance, you are sharing a special grandmother's love with me because each of my grandmothers had passed on prior to my birth and I have always felt I missed something that I have always wanted to be and am a grandmother to 2 darling girls plus 2 step grandchildren who I love endlessly. I pray that I leave some heart warming memories with them as to me, that is what it is all about when we come down to the scheme of things; our heritage?
Also, to me, this story is a 'keeper.'  There are just some stories that really touch us to the bone and in my heart, your story has found a fond place.
May you be blessed as you share a part of yourself with us through your writings.  
Fondly,
Norma Lee
xo

May your day be blessed

Bob Johnston

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